My E/E fic had a tiny hole in it.

Where was Lucy? I can easily see Susan and Peter not being around. Susan’s probably getting difficult to take, and although Peter still believes, he also probably has more of a life than the rest of them (he’s either in the military or he’s off studying for some important degree, idk we all know the Narnia timeline makes no sense anyway) but most people see the younger three as all kind of hanging out together.

So why are Edmund, Eustace and Jill all at this club without Lucy?

Unfortunately, my first thought was “threesome they don’t want her involved in”.


The other fic. I guess I really do see Caspian as a potentially awful boyfriend. Sure, he’s gallant and chivalrous and big hearted but he’s also used to getting what he wants and not thinking about what it costs other people. He makes everyone feel special and sometimes he thinks he actually means what he’s saying. And he goes through the Pevensies like David through the house of Saul.